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L i t t l e G r e y b i r d by ~XearthenXangelX:iconXearthenXangelX:



In a seat by the windows
In a classroom of flies,
I'll sit one more day;
My corner of lies.

A tiny grey creature
Goes hopping along,
Day after day,
Singing his song.

Of his delicate feathers
Ruff'ling in the breeze,
I sit and watch him,
Comforted, & at ease.

A spark'ling glimpse;
Only moments in sight;
I love how his eyes
Softly catch the light.

In these beautiful, dark,
Yet intelligent things,
I wonder how he feels
Soaring on his little wings.

Then he hops out of sight,
Singing sweetly, "aideu."
And I think, "Little Greybird,
Through a window, I'm watching you.

And I know I shan't see you again,
Though our last chance be tomorrow,
So, goodbye, my little friend;
'parting is such sweet sorrow.' "
©2007-2009 ~XearthenXangelX
:iconxearthenxangelx:

Author's Comments

I'll miss you, my little Greybird.
Have a wonderful life, beautiful flight.

Tomorrow is the last day of class until 4thQ, & I'm telling myself I've passed... let's hope it's the truth!

I don't really like the first stanza... I think I might have to change it, keeping the mood & the setting, but better conveyed.

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:iconhaffee:
This is a very nice poem
dont change the first stanza
:iconxearthenxangelx:
Thank you ^_^
Ye, it's kind of growing on me.

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what can i say? you take my breath away.

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:iconfrozen-vampiress:
nice poem! ^^

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I'll let my wounds wide open... I'll let them bleed... Just to remember, my love, the way you teach me to feel...

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